I like the way you have organised this post, Nicole. You take an interesting approach to the areas that combine your three texts.
To improve: 1) Incorporate more screen grabs and specific images/clips, rather than just re-showing the whole of the text. You can then focus specifically on a particular area/item/colour that continues your theme. 2) Mention briefly how your research helped you see the combinations between other artists' work. You can use examples that you analysed, and discuss how the key areas/themes/moods from a video can be utilised in the print texts.
I like the way you have organised this post, Nicole. You take an interesting approach to the areas that combine your three texts.
ReplyDeleteTo improve:
1) Incorporate more screen grabs and specific images/clips, rather than just re-showing the whole of the text. You can then focus specifically on a particular area/item/colour that continues your theme.
2) Mention briefly how your research helped you see the combinations between other artists' work. You can use examples that you analysed, and discuss how the key areas/themes/moods from a video can be utilised in the print texts.